Chough — in flight, polished

Both readings of "the first one", refined and shown against the treatments you liked. What changed in the polish: the span is pulled in so the wingtips sit at radius ≈43 instead of 49 (they were grazing the circular Pixel mask), the primary slots are evenly spaced, the cuts are reduced to three anatomical ones — wing/body on each side plus tail/body, so it reads as four parts rather than shattered — and the offset is now vertical so it doesn't break the bird's symmetry. Dashed tile shows Android's guaranteed-safe circle for the adaptive icon.

Before / after

The unrefined shapes from the last sheet, same scale, for comparison.